Judge's critiques

Opening was good.
Technical aspects – good
Good transitions
Liked dancing
Good accents
Women played the environment well
Drawn into the world and cared about the people
Judge felt characters with no names need distinct personalities
Guys playing teamsters are not low class enough
Union scene – men are not belligerent enough. Attitude is needed
Lenore and Violet – more in terms of shock when appearing at the strike site. Shocked that they do not want your help
Court scene. Judge more arrogant
Needs more presence
Tombs – girls struggle to dance
End is too sudden ?????? talk about this tomorrow
Cohen, pompous indignation at end
Build the end more – see tomorrow
Thugs more menacing. Embrace thugery. Be more surprised when Bridget jumps on his back
Anya – get purse off. Use hat as a distraction
Ruth –accent
Roth – hat? – use a cap
Roth, more of a struggle with letting emotion out.
Joe, listen at all times
Lenore, use round tones. Be elegant
Patrick, lower class