Kara's critiques

Monday Night - I am writing the critiques, then in another blog, writing the cuts. PLEASE Please, look at the lines cut.
Kara’s critiques
Joe, “Wanted Jew to keep fighting.
Murmur, - people noises – laugh, sneeze, sigh, etc. Kylee’s idea
Newsboys, slow down. Brandon, we will cut some of your first newsboy line
Nathan, good job walking around as a newsboy.
Kylee’s idea – she will buy newspapers from newsboys in order to move right stage.
2-3-2-4
We still need more levels with signs.
Roth, Thank, not think
Violet, good job!
Study lines even if you think you know them. We’re missing little words, but little words count.
Boys, no laughing
Stolle, better at being lustful
Can everyone Google images of winter in New York to see how cold and snowy it is?
Good job, Bridget, Wringing out shawl
Boys, take hats off indoors
Everyone is slurring the word “Union”. It sounds like sunion.
Good job spitting in union man’s hat, Bridget
Lannon, Kara likes your spiffy umbrella thing
Clara needs the gloves instead of others.
Ruth, good job being cold
Men need to be cold as well.
Great job, Brandon!
Murmur!
Immigrants is an insult! REACT
Awesome STOLLE,
We’re not were, Lenore
If you have read this far, tell Stolle you love him.
When Violet winked, only Bridget reacted.
Bridget was heard over everyone when Violet insults the judge.
Bailiffs are firm, not rough, so girls don’t struggle as hard
Roth, bigger arm movements during your monologue.
CUTS ARE IN NEXT BLOG.